Will Love not fade away
Earnest
Layer
Reactive
Should I stay or should I Go.
So many complex emotions
layer upon layer, reactive
To the slightest nuance or
Benign word well intended.
She tries in earnest, still
Will love not fade away, away
From the burden day by day.
8 comments:
I like the feelings this creates. The nuanced lines the construction. Welcome to 3WW and I hope you'll be back.
Interesting piece - it is indeed layered and complex, yet the words are simple universal songs.
Lovely, love the simplicity which of course is the most difficult thing to create...
Cool!
I really felt the struggle...your expressed it simply but powerfully. I'm glad you joined in 3WW and look forward to more from you!
I know someone who recently went through this. Well captured.
Very nice. I can feel the searching.
emotional fortune telling. well written emotions.
You ought to stay!
Welcome to 3WW!
Keep posting.
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